Showing posts with label The Poetry School. Show all posts
Showing posts with label The Poetry School. Show all posts

Tuesday, 1 May 2018

Thoughts on the NaPoWriMo experience

I cannot believe a whole month has gone by, that I managed to post something everyday and now it's all over.

Let's unravel that. There was one day when I didn't post because I couldn't understand the prompt but we had an amnesty day when we could catch up, revisit a prompt we missed or post another poem we had written during April. Strangely, that was the poem that caught the most attention. I didn't think it was that good. Seems I cannot be the judge of my own work!

I've taken part in NaPoWriMo twice before, I think, but working with The Poetry School was the best experience ever. I got feedback on every poem and had the chance to do the same with my fellow writers. It felt as if friendships were forming. They were a great bunch to work with.

Occasionally I posted rushed pieces due to my own time constraints. Writing a poem in around ten minutes is really scary. There's no time to edit properly, no time to let it sit. When there was time I tried to write and then leave it for a while and go back for a last look and edit before posting. I must say I was pleased with what I wrote last month. Some of my favourite prompts included writing a Pantoum - see example here. Basically a Pantoum is a series of quatrains where the second and fourth lines are repeated as the first and third of the next. Drove me crazy but the result was great and worth the effort. There was another (forget the name of the form) where you rearranged the word at the end of a line to anagram of it at the end of the next! Good on them The Poetry School supplied an online anagram site which I used as I am hopeless at anagrams. I ended up with a very crazy poem about sleeplessness involving Klingons eating fruit pies! It made people laugh anyway.

My work ranged from the downright stupid to love, loss, nature and Gothic darkness. Blank verse completely floored me and I ended up with something people liked despite my metre hiccups. There was also the random word poem (I use this when I get stuck for ideas). A list was supplied but the difference here (to the way I've done this before) is to then think of the first word that comes into your head on reading each word. The words you thought of are the ones you use in the poem. Then there was the writing a poem to music . I write to music about 90% of the time so I thought this would be easy. Ha! Strange, when you have to do it seems my mind goes blank. I often choose music to suit the mood/atmosphere I'm trying to convey when I write and this time I started with a music I used for the draft of dark novel I wrote. The poem was....dark! Tried again. Still not happy. All doom and gloom. Switched to Pachelbel's Canon on D Major and I got something very different and this was the one I posted.

Yesterday was the last day and the challenge was to take one poem, brush it up and submit it to a magazine! Well, I did submit yesterday to two different places. Two poems were ones I wrote as part of NaPoWriMo. However, I have yet to find somewhere suitable for the one everyone raved about. I need to choose wisely.

I already miss the daily log on to see what the prompt of the day is, and I miss my friends there, though the course is being left open for people to still use. This course did three things for me - it got me writing daily, it got my poetry seen by more people who gave me constructive feedback and I realised that I can write poetry! I may be struggling to get into magazines and win prizes but people seem to enjoy what I write. I'm someone who needs motivation (I write my best then)  and feedback or I slip into the pit of despair when time and time again I receive rejections (though I know I'm not alone in this). When I signed up for NaPoWriMo I wasn't sure what to expect but it's been a positive month and it's left me with the desire to carry on writing poetry.

Looking at my submissions book I see that I have a steady output of around three or four submissions a month. I don't set out with a target anymore. I do it as and when. Everything I submitted last month was poetry! So, I'd certainly recommend The Poetry School for next year if you want to get writing poetry in a friendly group. It be manic at times but it's also fun.


Saturday, 27 June 2015

Poetry & Diaries

Booking a poetry workshop so close after the Winchester Writers' Festival was probably a mistake, yet things come when they come. The 'Dear Diary' workshop (poetry & diaries) was originally due to be held at The Billingsgate Institute with a chance to look at the collection there. I was quite excited by this - the idea of looking at the diaries of ordinary people not normally available (well, you can actually go and look at them). However, due to the Institute being told they had to make money, the hire fee became too steep for The Poetry School to afford, so we met at the School's usual venue in Lambeth Walk.

We were asked to take along a published diary, and me being short of time ended up with the 'Lost Diaries of Adrian Mole' (which I didn't end up using but am having a good laugh reading it!). One the table was a collection of diaries in book form belonging to Julia Bird from The Poetry School (I never knew there were so many of them). Laura, who is working on the Diary Project at the Billingsgate Institute, brought along books from there carefully wrapped in tissue paper and boxes or in cellophane sleeves. We were allowed to handle these wonderful works of art. Wafting through the room was that wonderful smell of old books.

The earliest diary was from the 1700's written by a preacher visiting churches around the country, and one of the most weird was by a man who drew his face every day and made notes around it on the weather or about what he was doing. There was also a group of photos of items collected and kept in an attic room - everything from flattened Kodak film boxes to toothbrushes and brown medicine bottles. Everything was recorded in tiny writing.

These diaries gave an idea of the life these people led - from school children who kept dairies from aged eight to single women in wartime. Some were very funny, others stark. I have to say that I was far more fascinated by the books than the act of writing poetry from them. The first exercise was writing from the point of view of a teenager and I just couldn't get into that. We also tried an exercise using some part of a diary entry and putting ourselves into it. I couldn't get into that one either because I wasn't sure what I was supposed to be doing. I began looking at Virginia Woolf's diary for ideas but I really can't relate to her as a person and I remember giving up on her book 'To The Lighthouse' very early on - too much waffle for me. So by the end of the morning session I'd written nothing and spent the time reading extracts from some of the diaries.

Doodling instead of writing!
I do think that I really wasn't in the right frame of mind for this workshop (the writing aspect) but thankfully after lunch I finally managed to write one piece which I shared before I again drifted off and ended up doodling on my notebook! The subject matter was fascinating and that's what drew me and if I'm honest I'd really rather have spent the day looking at the diaries in more detail and discussing them. I can see they might be very useful as a resource for poetry but I would need more time to read and get a feel for them for that to work for me.

There is one diary I think I will have to read by Joan Wyndham ('Love Letters') described on Wikipedia as 'a latterday Pepys in camiknickers.' Her writing is funny. One entry (from 1939) describes how when her mother and Sid (not quite sure who he is) go to church, she gets drunk for the very first time on rum. She says that..... 'it was a very nice experience indeed. I no longer cared a damn what happened to anybody.


Friday, 9 May 2014

Campus Digital Day and other stuff

My novel has come to a stop right now as time hasn't allowed me one way or another. However, I have still been writing as I signed up for The Poetry School Campus Digital Day. This took place on Wednesday when I took the opportunity to submit a couple of poems to the feedback section - Show Us Your Poems run by poet Kim Moore. Because so many people uploaded poems she was only able to feedback on one for each person, but that was fine. Kim was very positive about the poem she read of mine, making a couple of suggestions. It's always nice to know you are on the right track and having feedback from a published poet is helpful. You feel they know what they are talking about! One of the other participants gave me feedback on the remaining poem. It seemed he really liked it.

The day was very popular and the site was struggling to cope in the morning but improved as the day went on. I wasn't able to sign up to the live chat about first collections due to the volume of people wanting just that but the transcript was available shortly afterwards. I was interested to see how new writers were 'picked up' from slush piles, competitions and magazines and about the process of putting together a collection. Although I'd thought about how to order my poems I'd not thought about how they would look on facing pages. Worth remembering.

I entered the 24/7 Poetry Challenge but didn't win, still it was fun. We were given a set of words and had to write a poem no longer than 40 lines using each of the words. This is the sort of challenge I enjoy.

Meanwhile the Start Writing Fiction course with FutureLearn is going well. We've been submitting short pieces of writing and then other students are allocated pieces to feedback on. I did four feedbacks and I've had three on mine. All were positive which is good to know because I rarely let anyone see my fiction! I'm now trying to get a little ahead because I'm soon going on holiday and don't want to fall too far behind. Luckily the next week's activities are up.

Maybe I will get the chance to do a little on my novel over the weekend but my back is really playing me up so I can't sit at the table typing for long and I've had to cancel my sporting and walking activities which I'm sad about.

Tuesday, 29 April 2014

Free courses in poetry and fiction writing...but be quick.

I never do anything by halves. I've signed up for various events being run by The Poetry School on their Campus site. I'd recommend this to everyone who wants to write poetry as on the 7th May Campus will be opening up stuff for the first time from previous courses for you to see. The day will have poetry challenges, a show-us-your-poems section, live chats and workshops. It's all free and anyone can join. All you have to do is sign up here.

I have also just started a Writing Fiction course with FutureLearn. I thought it was about time I tried to learn more about fiction writing, especially as I am attempting a novel (talk about cart before the horse). This one is run by the Open University and is free! When I will find the time for all this I don't know as my brother is coming to stay on Saturday for several days and I will also be away for a time in the middle of it all! Still, as it's online I can go at my own speed and catch up when I can.

Happy writing!

Sunday, 16 March 2014

Inspiration overload at 'Is there a doctor in the house?' day

I am still on a high after yesterday which is why I’m up this morning while the stars are still out writing this piece. I’ll explain.

I attended a jammed packed day with The Poetry School entitled Is there a doctor in the house? and the speakers were students who were or had just completed a PhD in poetry and were using subjects studied as a basis for lectures and workshops. The event was held at the 1901 Arts Club in Exton Street, London, just around the corner from Waterloo Station. The venue is quaint, intimate and cosy. The day began upstairs with registration, refreshments and signing up to workshops. There were a total of eight lectures downstairs, a room able to could cope with everyone attending, if necessary, and eight micro workshops upstairs. We were able to choose up to four workshops. I’d previously been emailed the programme for the day so knew which workshops I’d like to sign up for and I arrived early enough to get my name on each. Workshops were restricted to twenty students. I got talking to a lovely young lady who works part time for Arvon and had been on one of their courses. She enthused about the course which really kick-started her poetry writing. I realised that I was perhaps talking too much and put this down to not normally having enough contact with other writers so suddenly I go into overdrive. I hope I didn’t bore her! Also when I’m nervous I can go from not saying anything to not being able to stop. Gee why can’t I hit the happy medium!

After a short welcome and an explanation of how the day would pan out it was down to business. For me the first event was a lecture by John Challis on The Poem Noir which he explained crossed the genres but borrows from the visual language of classic film noir such as Double Indemnity. John used images from films to show what he meant – the dark stranger, unusual camera angles and the subject matter of complex study of the human condition including hopelessness, failure and betrayal. John also mentioned newer TV programmes which fall into this category, Luther, Breaking Bad, The Killing, Broadchurch. He looked at how the stories come across with loss of identity being a key feature and the use of atmosphere in dynamic dark death and mystery, nightmares, drug state and the underworld. He mentioned the author Chandler who I don’t know and talked about the detective breaking the rules to get the result.

I’d signed up for John’s workshop which came directly after the lecture. I should say here that each lecture and workshop lasted just thirty minutes so a lot was going on in a short space of time and the day whizzed by. In the workshop we had the chance to try out some writing using the imagery of film. As a way in, we were each given a sheet of poems that John felt fell into the category of Poem Noir. They included a series of poems from Fetch by Tamar Yoseloff and Tail by Deryn Rees-Jones from Quiver. We spent a few minutes looking and discussing the poems and then had a go writing our own. We were told to write it as if we were following ourselves like a detective. Some people shared their efforts. My draft wasn’t brilliant but I have since realised that I can use this as a way into a poem I’ve been struggling with for a while. Suddenly I see its potential!

From that workshop I dived straight into the next lecture which was by Tara Bergin, Bloodaxe archive film screening. After a short introduction there was a fifteen minute film which she and one other poet had made while looking through the Bloodaxe archive which now resides at Newcastle University and which had so far been un-categorised. The film included some interviews they had made with JohnHegley, Simon Armitage, Gillian Allnutt and Anne Stevenson.  A very interesting film and project – all this stuff unseen! After the lecture it was upstairs for the workshop entitled Archive into Art. Tara gave us some pointers and we set to work drafting a poem as if we were the archivist coming across something of our own – writing first something from academic stance which then flood into emotions. I found this workshop difficult and couldn’t get a handle on it in the time, though I did share my measly first line!

And then it was lunchtime! I headed off to Sainsbury’s Local only to find the cupboard bare. The few lefts overs were all meat based so I headed over the road to the station and picked up a cheese and tomato baguette. I should have bought lunch when I arrived but you learn. I took my lunch into the Mosaic Garden around St John’s Church where I’d been before to photograph the mosaics and sat in the sunshine. It was a chance to switch off and re-charge the batteries.

The afternoon session for me began with Helen Taylor’s lecture on the Merseybeat Poets, Henri, McGough and Patten. She explained how they worked together making poetry accessible to everyone as an entertainment. I’m a big fan of McGough’s poetry having seen him live – I have never laughed so much – and enjoy the play on words and the sheer humour. Helen showed some examples from the days of performing together and how their methods worked. One example I loved was the play on the You Never Walk Alone song title which had been written by Henri (I think) as You Never Wore Cologne. Say it quickly and see! I just love this stuff and wish humorous poetry got more recognition and was not dumbed down. I wonder how many ‘light’ poems win prizes. I don’t think humour is taken seriously….mmmm!

I then took some time out as there was nothing that really appealed to me in the next section so I grabbed a tea and headed up to the roof terrace which was open all day for those who wanted some space to write or relax. It was lovely up there in the sun and I was joined by two others. We all did our own thing. One lady was busy writing up her poem on her laptop, another had a quick ciggi and read the paper and I dived into my latest read – a biography of Charles Dickens. Afterwards I headed down to the workshop by A B Jackson on Erasure. Wow! I loved this. A bit like found poems but you take a text and basically rub out all the words you are not using leaving only the ones for the poem.  Tom Phillips has done this and is still doing it with a book of around 300 pages which he is erasing leaving only what he wants. See his website here. A B Jackson gave us some extracts from South: the Story of Shakleton’s Last Expedition and we got to work with pen and coloured pencils making our own poems. Those who shared came up with extraordinary poems. I was very impressed. I was also hooked. I love found poems. They are a fun way to relieve writer’s block and the results can be quite liberating. Now I’ve found a new obsession and will be using these methods for sure.

The final lecture I attended was Sound in Poetry by Janet Rogerson. We looked how inseparable sound is from writing poetry, not only in its rhythm and used of assonance and other techniques but our own sound – the one unique to us. Janet calls this our Poetic DNA and often the subconscious will kick in when we write. This is something I have noticed in my own writing. Often when I read something back I realise that I have internal rhymes that have formed automatically, they were not intentionally formed. That always amazes me. This is what engages the reader and often it is this that makes them say – I like that poem but I don’t know why. YES, I know that too. Janet is really onto something here. Our sound also identifies us and forms a thread which runs through all our work. I’d say that it takes some time to find our own voice/sound but I do see things in my own poetry that I would now identify as me. Perhaps others would see that too.

Here the day ended. There was a wrapping-up and goodbye session. I found myself sitting next to A B Jackson and we got into a conversation about his workshop and how much it inspired me. Another lady joined us and we touched again on the copyright issue that came up in the workshop (using the text by another writer even chopped up was a worry for some, including me, on how we stood on publication, did we need to acknowledge sources?) This issue could run but the consensus seems to be that as poets we are making something new and words used are individual or a string of perhaps four together and taken out of context. When I use found poems I often use more than one source and they are all mixed up. Anyone want to comment on this please do. It would be interesting to see how others approach it but on the whole no one says this is a found poem when they submit. It may be obvious but often not. Sometimes the source is acknowledged on a project, instances were given in the workshop and one I know of is Ruth Padel who wrote a series of poems, a mix of her own words and those of Charles Darwin from his scientific notes and journals. Really interesting take on poetry. Like other art forms poetry evolves.

I’ve always like playing with words and using poetry ‘games’ as a way in to new ideas, especially when I’m stuck as it gets the mind working in totally different ways and the work produced is often very different from other poems I write. I find them surprising and exhilarating. The lecture on sound and the one on erasure brought it home to me how much I love working this way. I enjoy experimenting and off the way ideas often appeal to me. I have much here to play with after yesterday, enough to keep me going on those bleak, arid days when words will not come.


There were other lectures and workshops on offer that I was not able to attend or did not quite appeal. I had to toss-up between the lecture on sound and the workshop on Identify with Kath D’Arcy. In the end sound won. All the lectures were filmed by Pighog Poetry and highlights will be appearing soon. I will let you know where. It might just be on The Poetry School Campus site or their main site, possibly Facebook too. Photos were also taken in lectures and workshops. So if you feel you missed something (and you did!) you may still be able to get a piece of the action. I will post links when I have them.  Maybe the success of the event will prompt The Poetry School to make this an annual occurrence. 

Monday, 3 March 2014

Poetry lectures and workshops opportunity

I've booked myself a place on to Is there a doctor in the house: The Poetry School's PhD Festival. The day consists of mini lectures and micro workshops and it takes place on Saturday 15th March. See the link for times, cost and venue. If you see me come and say hello!

Tuesday, 3 December 2013

What next?

I had an email recently saying thanks for entering their competition but I couldn't remember sending anything! I had to look back through all my entries for the year and there it was back in March. No wonder I couldn't remember.  I have no idea why I sent it so early, very unusual for me. Actually, why did they wait so long to thank me?  Hummm!

The online poetry feedback course with The Poetry School has now ended.  It was useful to see where I can improve the poems I contributed and I really admired others contributions. There were some very good poets in the group. We all started off a bit gingerly but each week the poems just got better.  There were some amazing poems. I'm a bit relieved it's finished though as giving feeding back on so many poems was very time consuming and I'm not that good at it! Good practice though.

I'm not sure where I am going next. I've not signed up for any new courses and what I'm thinking is maybe to do more editing of poems I have to try and improve them. I want to take time to read more. I'd like to take a break from writing for a while and then just mess around with words - no thinking about publication and deadlines. I do still have a story to edit and I still can't seem to motivate myself to start.

I'm not going to make any decisions now. Christmas is coming up with lots of other things needing my time and I find I get stressed even when I think I'm not! So some time out will be good. I'll review things in the new year.

Friday, 6 September 2013

Back to school??

Last night I went along to The Poetry School Autumn Launch Party at the Tea House Theatre in Vauxhall. During the first half of the evening six students from Tim Dooley's class Finding a Style read their poems, some of which were generated in his class, others not.  It was a very warm evening so in the break my friend and I decided to have a walk in the cooler air and then wandered back for the second half.  The first readings were by a poet who will be teaching at the School for the first time as part of the 'academy'. Following on was Hannah Lowe who taught a class last year.  She read from her collection Chick which I very much enjoyed and for me was the best poet of the night.

Having signed up with The Poetry School for an online feedback course starting later this month, this was a nice start to academic year. It will be nice to be pushed to write again because I've not done a great deal of poetry writing since July.

August was taken up with other things like decorating and there are still outstanding issues with that (if you read my other blog you can find out what I've been doing in 'my other life').  However, I have written a lot on my family tree and about my life growing up.  I've reached  around 30,000 words or so.  This isn't for publication but for passing on to my sons.  I think it is important because my family is small and all I know will soon be lost.

In addition to that I have written a short story (about 800 words), the idea of which had been rolling around in my head for a few days before I wrote it sitting in the garden one afternoon.  I've edited and typed it up and may submit it to a competition I have in mind.

I missed the deadline for OU Poets comments by two days, which also means I didn't get a poem submitted either but I did manage to send one to Areopagus and I've submitting to the Postcard Competition in The New Writer, so all is not lost!

My electric guitar 
The last time I wrote a proper post here I'd told you all that I had quit from the Songwriting course I was doing online.  Well, I had a think - calmed down and decided that I wanted to complete this course somehow and that I would not be a quitter! So I went back and managed to do the assignment for week 4 as some of what I was learning began to fall into place.  I did miss two lots peer evaluations which means a 20% deduction on both weeks but at the end of the course the lowest score is dropped.  Week 5 was a real learning curve.  Not only did I have to write a complete song but also sing it and upload it and use and submit worksheets.  I was away for three days which meant a heavy workload when I returned because week 5 was the equivalent of two weeks rolled into one.  I spent a whole day and evening filling in worksheets, writing and recording but I made it.  The final week was much lighter and all I had to do was re-record my song with slight adjustments for what is known as front or back heavy phrasing (a sort of body language for songs).

I have now completed the course, which was my main aim.  I know I didn't fully fulfil the criteria each time but I got some nice comments on my songs, along with a few of the other sort but when I evaluated other peoples I realised that I am not as bad as I thought.  Reading through the discussion forums it seemed some people were lucky and got some good things to review.  Some, though, were like me and got some awful things, incomplete lyrics, no link to a song so I couldn't hear what it sounded like and some of the lyrics left a lot to be desired, some quite unpleasant!  I hate marking people down and usually I would give a more positive result unless it was really bad.  The peer evaluations need to be re-thought by the staff because there were so many people complaining about it.  So I'm not that bothered on my grade (which I think I get at the end of next week) because some of it is based on other students ratings, I am just pleased I survived and I actually like my final song!

Out of all the evaluations I had to do I only came across one that really gave me hope!  This guy's song blew me away and I'd quite happily have listened to it time and time again.  His lyrics weren't brilliant but the melody and his singing just did it for me.  It was so nice to hear after all those others.  I gave him top marks.

I wouldn't do another songwriting course but I learned a lot from it and the teaching was excellent.  I have great admiration for proper songwriters now.  I'm sure not every one of those uses these methods but some do, those who take the time to match song to lyrics.  It was fascinating.  The tutor showed the process of a song being recorded - the first listening was just great but they went on to adjust it as I mentioned for the 'body language' and it was incredible!  So this tutor knows what he's talking about.

Anyway, I'm proud that I completed the course.  I did the best I could with the time I had and what I could understand. I eventually even managed to tackle using the basics of Audacity and Soundcloud without help. I may post a link here in a while to my song on Soundcloud if I'm brave enough so you can all have a laugh!

Monday, 9 July 2012

Is it really poetry and does it matter?

The poetry course I have been doing with The Poetry School is about to end.  I have uploaded my last poems and commented on others who have contributed.  At the start there were about 35 signed up, yet possibly only 25 took part and over the weeks the numbers dropped until now with the last assignment perhaps six of us uploaded poems, though the forum will remain open for a while for anyone who wants to catch up with any assignments they missed.  It may be that some people did the assignments but didn't upload their poetry.  It takes guts to share your work with others and the dread of what people may think of it, what comments you might receive might put some off.  I do hope the others got something out of it, though I suspect that for some the assignments may have seemed a bit 'off the wall'.  I have to say that though some assignments did seem a bit silly I did them all and felt a sense of satisfaction (and relief!) when I had completed them.  It was fun and I think this appealed to me because I love word play and being silly...thankfully I wasn't the only one!  There was often the cry of 'Is it poetry?' but I don't think that was really the point.  I think of the course more as a poetry generator, a point to start from.  I'll miss it!

Where do I go now?  Well, the new Poetry School brochure is out and I am contemplating.........

I have been experimenting with writing while plugged into music on my laptop.  I find different music encourages different ways with poems - some energetic, some moody, some romantic.  I've written three poems this way.  In the last assignment we were encouraged to invent our own poetry form* (something a little wacky....just up my street).  Due to my love of music my form is for two or more stanzas of three lines. Each line must contain a word associated with music.  I had such fun with this I might write a series!  Why not make up your own form, set your own restrictions and go for it. Do feedback.

(The last assignment included a made up form called 'Wilson' consisting of five short punchy lines that all rhymed except the middle line which had to include a non-rhyming reference to a vegetable! I kid you not.  We had to write one of these.  Mine is below)


Lightning Wilson

Lightning forks the sky
Electric fizz and fry
Like onions sizzling in a pan
Watch those white streaks fly
Earthing, then they die.




Saturday, 16 June 2012

Change

Here is another of the exercises I did a few weeks ago with The Poetry School.  We had to write against a background beat.  I took the opportunity to chose a Trance track (a good workout one!)  Here is the track and the words are below with approx. timings.
 
             Change


0.16    Change, jump, turn, do
Change, jump, turn, do
Change, (do it) jump, (go to it) turn, (direction) do (take action)
Change, (do it) jump, (go to it) turn, (direction) do (take action)

0.43    Take a chance, quit the reason
Jump the lights, flip the season
Turn heels, turn dreams
Do your thing and quit those teams

 0.57    And
Change, jump, turn, do
Change, jump, turn, do
Change, (do it) jump, (go to it) turn, (direction) do (take action)
Change, (do it) jump, (go to it) turn, (direction) do (take action)

1.27    Turn your life round
Change direction
Jump the start line
Make the connection
Go grab the action
Write your story
Make your music
Grab your glory

 1.41    Life is a canvas, come on make your mark
Splash on bright colours, ban the shade, ban the dark
Don’t wait, life don’t keep
Don’t drift, take a leap
Turn the corner
Turn the stone
Take the wager
Take what you own.

2.09    If you silence all that yearning
It will grip your very heart
It will sneak into your dreaming
And break your little life apart

If you remain always static
And sit upon that goddamn fence
Your life will end in stagnation
Full of algae, full of stench

2.38    Take the lines, jump between them
Reach for gold, don’t believe them
When they say stay the same
Don’t you listen, play your game.


Take the action, take the leap
If you dither prepare to weep
Nothing happens if you leave it
Take that step, come on believe it.

 3.06    Change, jump, turn, do
Change, jump, turn, do
Change, (do it) jump, (go to it) turn, (direction) do (take action)
Change, (do it) jump, (go to it) turn, (direction) do (take action)





Saturday, 5 May 2012

Poetry word games

I have just joined an online line poetry course with The Poetry School called Adventures In Form.  This is an unusual sort of poetry as the forms are not your usual sonnets or villanelles but made up forms using word games.  The course is untutored but the assignments (10 in all) are uploaded each week and then participants work on them and upload their offerings and comments can be made via the forums.  There are over 20 people on this course so I have found it time consuming keeping up with all the emails in my Inbox so now I just log on to the course and view them from there.  The first assignment was a oulipo sonnet and the idea was to choose a title from a sign or saying etc., and then use the letters from that to form a poem of 14 lines.  I used the added restriction of trying to write it as as a sonnet with rhyme scheme.  What fun and what a challenge but I really got into it. It can help to use an anagram generator - one for Scrabble is good.  You can find an online one through Google.  Just type in the title and it will list all the words you can make out of the title.

The next assignment is writing what's known as N+7, meaning to change each noun in your poem to the 7th one following in the dictionary. Try using www.spoonbill.or/n+7/ You can type or paste in your poem and it will make the changes for you. It can be very funny.  Whether it is poetry is another story!  All good fun though.

Here is my oulipo sonnet with title taken from a magazine and no doubling up on letters:


Spruce up your home for spring

You refine your home in a soupçon,
root out mess, compress,
ship out in grey sing-song,
focus on genre, of purpose,
muse on scope for a fancy
corner in green or crimson;
no grimness here, sun, comfy
in rosy hue on crisp space, fine cushion;
pep up spring in fiery rinse, pour
cerise from cans, shiny, hip,
no passé guise in puce or more,
no gross or grimy form can grip
for in your eyes you can see secure
your rooms supreme, sprucy, pure.